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A short fanfic following the events of The Tekkit Rebirth #17

Warning!: Spoilers!

I hear the explosion, even from miles away. Shock fills my body. "Teep! We need to go back!" I yell. I fly as fast as I can. "No." I say. "This can't be happening."
I should have stayed. Why did I leave her alone, after all I went through to try to get her back.
The castle lies ahead of me. Or at least its remains. In the middle of the gaping chasm that has just formed, she lies.


Her aura circles around her. She is still alive, but barely. I run to her, and cradle her head in my arms. "Zoey" I whisper softly.
Her eyes open, and she stares up at me. I can feel she is struggling. The stains of blood blend perfectly with her hair.

"Rythian." She says to me. "The life stone. It kept me alive. But I can't bear it much longer."

The orange aura around her is dimming, quickly. It will soon be gone completely. "Zoey," I say " When you contacted me on the monitor, I wanted to tell you something."
My throat is dry as I say, "I wanted to tell you that... I missed you. I needed you. I...I love you."
"I...I love you too, Rythian. I don't care if I'm science and you're magic. We can make it work!" She struggles saying this, as if they were her last words.

"Don't leave me Zoey. We can be together. You will survive."

"I... I'm so sorry, Rythian."

"Zoey, I feel you should know..." I remove my mask, and show her. The black, crawling up my face. I am turning into an Enderman.
"It started a long time ago. I made a deal. I was selfish, and wanted to be immortal. I made a deal with the Queen. The Enderdragon."

"The Enderbabe?" She struggles to say.

"Yes." I reply. "That wish granted me immortality, but came with a price. I would, very slowly become an Enderman. Starting with my heart.
But that didn't stop me from loving you. Because of you, I am not one of them. "

"I... I never knew what you were really dealing with. I could have helped you."

Those were the words I told her when she was trying to stop the Nuke.

The aura is faint, and only lights up her face, slightly. Even when her last minutes are upon her, she still looks so beautiful.
"Goodbye." Her voice is just a whisper.
Her eyes close, and her heart stops.

She is gone.

"No..." I say. "NO!" The tears I have long awaited to cry, come.

"She's dead."

Everything seems like it is in slow motion, yet, it is happening so fast.

I take off my cloak and lay it over her lifeless body.

I cannot die, to be with her.
What if I could resurrect her?

I suddenly realize, that there is another option.

"I can resurrect her." I say to myself. "But, it will come with consequences."

When I made the deal with the Queen, it granted immortality. I could make another deal.

But is she at peace?

Would she never want to be cursed?

Would she hate me?

I love her too much to think about the options. I must try.

Casting spells, and speaking words older than time, I contact the queen.

"You... You betrayer. What do you want." Says the Queen.

"I need you to save my friend. Please. I'm sorry for what I did. Never again will it happen."

"Why should I?"

Her voice is like nails on a chalkboard.

"Because... I love her."
The words feel weird coming out of my mouth, even though I've thought them a million times, over and over again.

"You tried to slow the curse I put on you. Tried to stop it."

"I'm so very sorry, my Queen."

"Hmm... In return for this, she will be cursed, and you must give up your powers."

A part of me is saying no, but the other part is overpowering. Love.

"I will give up my powers... for her." I say.

Ending 1:

She speaks the words.

"Resuscitabit eam,
Per amorem et potentia,
Et induit maledictionem sicut.
Spiritus manebit in aeternum!"

A blinding light appears where Zoey's body is, and it engulfs her. Her body floats up, into the air.
Around her, the lights, which are orange and red, circle her.

A phoenix like figure surrounds her body, and she floats to the ground.

Her body is a pale gray, and she has blue lipstick.

She was cursed to be a ghost.

Floating towards me, she says " Rythian! I'm alive! Di...Did you do this?"

"Yes. But, now you are cursed to be a ghost. Forever. It's what I had to do to bring you back to me. I even gave up my powers."

"You would really give all of that up for me?" She replies, in shock.

"Yes. I love you"

"And, I don't care that i'm a ghost, as long as i'm with you. We can be together, forever."

Even though she is a ghost, I can still feel her embrace.

Ending 2:

She speaks the words.

"Resuscitabit eam,
Per amorem et potentia,
Et induit maledictionem sicut.
Spiritus manebit in aeternum!"

But instead of being engulfed in a bright purple light like I had, she is swallowed with black.

This doesn't feel right.

Her body is lifted up, and a skull surrounds her.

When her body reaches the ground again, she is still dead.

It didn't work.

"That is what you get for trying to get rid of the curse." says the Queen.
"And you can't die, to be with her either."

She cackles, and vanishes.

I drop to my knees.

She really is gone.

And I can't be.

With nothing to live for, no magic, and nothing to keep me from transforming into an Enderman, I finally give into the darkness.

I will never remember her.

She fades away from my memory.

Goodbye, Zoey.
I was bored (and sad) after the events of Rebirth #17, so I wrote this.

NEXT SEASON...WHERE ARE YOU????? *sob sob*


The sequel has come

And so has the third part!

Part 1/3 in whatever I shall name this series.

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silvaze64 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013
trollfaceman123 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013
A little part of me died today ;-;

R4nd0mRe4ds Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ending two got me I'm crying, what have you done to me oh my feels!!!
Krys411 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm sorry but my brain was in spellcheck mode when reading this. "my throat was try" SORRY XD
Beautiful story, on my way to read 2 & 3 right now!
EpicRainbowPanda Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Glad you enjoyed!
Krys411 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Xedotic Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This reminds me of the crossroad demons in Supernatural, I love your writing (Ending 2 was awesome) :D
flashstreak Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013  Student Artist
TheYogCat Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Student Writer
Poem would be cool but depressing.
From Zoey's point of view, there wouldn't be all that much to write-apart from lots and pain and sorrow before the end.
EpicRainbowPanda Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
TheYogCat Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013  Student Writer
Though I guess you could include something like flashbacks to her past-her old mushroom town on fire, family and friends and whatever.
That would be pretty cool.
EpicRainbowPanda Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'll try...
Thanks for the advice!
TheYogCat Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013  Student Writer
No probs.
EpicRainbowPanda Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Do you guys think I should write a sequel (in Zoey's POV), with both endings?

Also, should I release a poem I wrote in Zoey's "Final Moments"?

I dunno...
TheYogCat Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Student Writer
NO IMPACT!! You are totally messed up if you think that!!!
EpicRainbowPanda Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I never thought I would impact people like this...

I don't understand this feeling...
Thank you so much!
FEAGroup-Amandie007 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Student Writer
Oh my Notch....I'm crying about that damn Second Ending... :sniff:
DrWhofan679 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm crying right now, and I've never done that to any story. You have accomplished something great. You are an amazing writer.
PoptartCatPikachu Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Why....the second I'm drowning in feels now....
zoeythianftw Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013
omg i'm literally crying there can't be a Rythian with no Zoey, there can't be.
Hockeygirlmya Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Just to make me happier i like ending one better. *sobs* I want season 2 to. Hes crushing the fandoms hearts.
Deer-dog Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Student Digital Artist

this is one of those, lay down, try not to cry, cry allot moments T~T oh gosh somanyfeels
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